高中英语读后续写积累素材积累(一)(1)

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姓名： ______________ 一、环境描写的素材

环写境。客观环境描写： 描通写常分Part 1 环境描写的 adj 要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道 在为描客the blue sky(蓝天） the songs of birds（鸟鸣） the thundering clouds（电光闪雷 ）鸣写观时和the fragile flowers ( 娇嫩的花） ;（the dark,raining evening 雨夜交加的夜晚） the green grass（青 主主客草）） ; the setting/rising sun( 落日 /冉冉升起的太阳） ⋯ 观 the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰观两交种Part 2 环境描写的 verb （vi&vt ）要求 替角进一度) ．Wind （blow/click/howl/wail/roar） 行：，客1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a 主观观为curtain, 一⋯ 阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。 描从。 环2.The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that 境事sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡木丛灌的下。 物本3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park凉. 爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。 身入4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.(冷风吹拂过我的头 ）发手，The wind was perfect for kite flying, blowing just hard enough to give some lift. 者角度描 （今二) ．Water (flow/travel/move/meander/enter) 日正声音： 1.At one point, the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley. 是放在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。 风

筝2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear 颜色 的好天s

3.A little way off was a small brook, rushing and sparkling along between green bank. 气u，r强离

f,劲4. It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother. a的有似风一c力乎三条) ．Sky (stand/ appear/turn) e带它小

.动溪在The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. 1.了 温，风天在柔水升。） 空2.蓝蓝的天空高高耸立 绿低Blue skies stood tall and far是是色语浓深的，浓1蓝河 的色岸就灰。一色的 位，， 天阳真少光女在专业资料分享 对透着明

班级： _______________

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主观环境描写：

5.Sb found sth adj/doing/done某人发现某物（状态/动作 /被） ...

6.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done某人看到 /听到 /感到 /闻到某物（状态/动作 /被） 7.It was so adj that we find/feel 它是如此 ....以至于

8.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/ 景物使我如此陶醉 /惊讶/ sth held sb entirely in their power 9.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like

景物让我完全惊呆了

景物看起来像⋯

⋯

5. At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky,like paper sharks roaming for prey. 二、Within an hour, the number doubled, and red, blue, and yellow kites glided and spun 场

in the sky. A cold breeze wafted through my hair. The wind was perfect for kite flying, 景描

blowing just hard enough to give some lift, make the sweeps easier. 写

（（来自原著：追风筝的人）

放空风中字筝已的翻的经头了6. The water was a deep blue andsunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface. 场挂发一景湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。 着。番描至这，写少风红7. Then I glanced up and sawa pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the ，二正色从十适的sky. They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park, over the windmills, 各来宜、个只放蓝floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking downon San Francisco, the city I now 角风色筝的c度，，、我a立如抬风黄飞） l同起速色越 纸不的l当成家园的城市。头公制大风， 园8. Blue skies stood tall and far,the sun like a branding iron searingthe back of your 的 ，筝西h鲨望恰在边Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry, and rickshaws neck. 鱼见好苍o的，能穹两m树stirred dust when they sputtered by（. 场景、比喻） 巡让来只林e游风回红，天空一碧如洗， 阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。 整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂， 到了夏天它们 搜色筝飞.飞猎飘舞 的越也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵灰 。尘食风浮，（物起熠筝车9. Somewhere,a branch snapped,an owl hooted. The wind, soft and cold, clicked 。来熠，场不 生 景并through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope. And from below, 到带辉排） 头，这个数 的微风吹过我着飘the faint sound of watertumbling through the valley. 长浮长着在的，某上 如个的在天空中冉冉升起。 它们舞动着， 2同地灌一方木双传丛眼来。睛树而俯枝下金劈面山，这个我现在 啪，作水 流还在有山猫谷头淌专业资料分享 动寒风微微拂动树枝， 吹过山坡 ，

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10. By three o'clock, the rain had stopped andthe sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds. A cool breeze blew through the park（. 天气）

到三点时，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布，一阵寒风吹过公园。

11. The sun was beginning to set, glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.（景象）

太阳开始下山，那些摇摇欲坠

的房子的裂缝中，渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。

三、描写时间，动作，心理和情感 一) 、情感好词： 10. 喜乐

① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 ② A smile of understanding flashed across his face他. 脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。 ③ A ripple of excitement ran through them. 一阵激动声穿过他们。 ④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕 。 ⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐 。

⑥ A wild gaiety（快乐） took hold of her. 一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。

⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. 令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。 ⑧ I was wild with joy. 我欣喜若狂。

⑨ I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。

⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。 Her smile lit up the whole room. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。 She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。

Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。 She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。

Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。 Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦 。 I was floating on air. 我漂浮在空中 。

Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。 11.愤怒：

① I was seized by anger我. 充满了愤怒。② He was fuming with rage. 他气得大发雷霆。 ③ His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发了。

④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。 ⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。 ⑥ His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。

⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。 ⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。 ⑨ He flared up at the word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。 ⑩ His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。

12.悲伤烦恼

①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着， 眼泪顺着面颊流了下

来。

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② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 ③ Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tear她s.的手在颤抖。 她快要哭了。 ④ H earing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wi听ne到. 这

个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。

⑤ ⑥ ⑦ She burst into tears and ran out of the room她. 突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。She sobbed, hiding her face in her hand她s.掩面哭泣。I tried to fight back tears. /My eyes were filled with tears.

我努力忍住眼泪。 / 我的眼里充满了泪水。

⑧ A frown（皱眉） now stood on his face.他皱起了眉头。

⑨ They sat there with glum looks on their faces. 他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。 ⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。 He brimmed over with sorrow when... 他满是悲伤 ⋯ ⋯ They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。 These days he was in low spirits.这些日子他情绪低落。 4.害怕：

①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror. 他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。 ②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。

③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐惧 ⋯ ⋯ ④She was choked by fear.她因恐惧而窒息。

⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied她. 脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.

他心中涌起一阵恐惧。

她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。

/ 恐惧淹没了他。

打结。

⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocate（d 窒息） . ⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.

她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针 。毡

5. 感动：

① Touched deeply/immensely,we⋯ 被 深深感动 ，我们 ⋯ ⋯ ② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude她. 热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。③ With tears streaming down her face, she..泪. 水顺着她的脸颊流了下来， ⋯ ⋯

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